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| MysteryReader 2008-05-17 ch 4, anon. | abuseMy dog makes that kind of noise... the "smoke alarm" bark, haha! I love Aristotle. ^_^ I liked everything in this chapter and I'm glad you used a bit more of that imagery. Particularly the part with Evie... lol. The snot bit was gross, but hey, not all heroines can be beautiful all the time, right? And I already love Rowan, if that were even possible. Him and Quincy... a sibling yin-yang, I assume? LOVIN IT. Will you be including more snippets of Evie's writing in the next chapter? If not, could you? I hope you do have a seperate storyline for that... it'd be fun for us to try and put the pieces together to find more stuff about it. Can't wait for the next one!! |
| Rouge Sang 2008-05-16 ch 4,  | abuseExcellent. That's all I have to say. The plot is interesting, and I like the fact that you aren't rushing in to a romance. I also love your character's unusual names. :) Wonderful chapter! Can't wait for more! ~Trix |
| glb 2008-05-16 ch 1, anon. | abuseOh, I love this idea, and I love your characters! Please update soon. |
| Coralem 2008-05-12 ch 4, | abuseWhoa very nice writing! I really like the idea of this story. Keep up the great work! |
| LondonLi 2008-05-12 ch 4, anon. | abuseThis guy is still a complete jerk, but you're doing a great job with this story. I loved this chapter! Thanks for posting! |
| BLeaf 2008-05-12 ch 4, | abuseVery interesting! Write soon =) Quincy's intriguing, and Rowan even more so |
| dee 2008-05-12 ch 4, anon. | abuseI love your writing style! And i love the use of inner monologue... you don't get too descriptive but the thoughts of the characters more than make up for it but even then you prove that you're capable of description through Evie's story. Very impressive! Keep up teh great work! |
| withered-orchid 2008-05-12 ch 4, | abuseI just have to start by saying that Aristotle's little moment was so adorable... loved it. Evie never gets a break does she? Hahah. The poor thing... well, at least Quincy was there! We just met Rowan but I can't imagine him acting the good samaritan lol. You also had me going "uh oh..." at the end. I can imagine Evie's reaction if she finds out about it. :) GREAT update! |
| JamieBell 2008-05-11 ch 4, | abuseI like this concept. It's intriguing. I'll definitely be following this one. Keep up the good work! :) |
| Far.abi 2008-05-11 ch 3, | abusewow i really love the concept. although i can't really picture evie too much. great story. keep updating! |
| kewlli 2008-05-11 ch 3, | abusei love the details in this story. and the creativity. she's going to fall in love with mozart! |
| centenarian 2008-05-10 ch 4, | abuseNice story...very interesting. Nice writing by the way. Hope you update soon. |
| ChocolateCoveredRoses 2008-05-04 ch 3, | abuseAw, Evie. Poor dear. I love her. And Mozart, even though he's a bit of a...jerk. UPDATE, lovie. |
| Catty 2008-05-02 ch 3, anon. | abuseUh, you've managed to make me a little teary-eyed in this chapter. I hope you're happy! >< Nothing hurts more than to have someone crush your dream. Besides that.. I really liked this chapter. I know I should hate the dad but it's obvious that he's going through some tough times as well. Can't really blame him for acting that way. Oh man, I hope you do well on your finals! And I can't wait for the next chappie. ^^ |
| Miss Dagny Taggart 2008-05-02 ch 3, | abuseThat stinks about finals (I too am in that boat) but I am looking foward to chapter 4!! |