dude thats out*ingstanding, "A Canticle for the Heavenly Realms Realms of Heaven, star spangled glory—Fantastic hosts of long lost lore— Tangent pinpricks tell the story"

I love the intro. keep it up, you poetry keeps me going when I miss y'all

very powerful imagery in this! i could picture this being chanted around a huge bonfire, like some sort of tribal ritual. really cool. great job!

Beautiful imagery in this... I love the lines "They do sing with voices of thunder, throwing planets wild, asunder." The comma in this line seems unnecessary, though - "In unearthly dens, in the sky"

Also, the first line is repeated. Not sure if you noticed that.

-Jesse

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