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stained blue 2008-06-07 ch 1,	abusei like the repeatation of the part in italics & the (Bust her lip to Make her see ‘This is what you Mean to me’) such a beautiful way to say it.
siphoned afterglow 2008-04-22 ch 1,	abusewell, it seems like your writing syle has changed Tess. i like this piece, but not so much as your previous pieces that completely grind me in to your emotion. i felt this was a bit detached. perhaps you wanted it that way, then thats alright. i like the buring cerebral memories and the two lines in italics. it made me think of the complexities of relationships. 'Bust her lip to Make her see ‘This is what you Mean to me’- does this mean he hit her? because if that what you're converying, i think its a wonderful way of conveying it. its got lovely sense of sort-of-humor to it and an underlying tone of anger. well, i'll shut up for now and wait for your next piece. love, Alishya
Sonora the free 2008-04-20 ch 1,	abuseThis could actually be turned into a song very quickly. I like it, and I'm adding it to my faves.
Edensong 2008-04-20 ch 1,	abuseInteresting concept, I like it. Reads almost like a song. Strong ending. Very descriptive, quite haunting. Keep writing!