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Addyson
2008-07-20
ch 1,
abuseReview Marathon (link in profile)

That was a cute story! I think that there were some parts that could have used a grammar check, but besides that, it was a really cute story. Great job
Aria Deloncray
2008-06-16
ch 1,
abuseGreat story! At first I was a little annoyed that you didn't reveal his name but now I think it was a really great idea.
Tetelestai
2008-05-22
ch 1,
abuseThis was beyond excellent! Very sweet and original. If only a hot guy would give me fake sunflowers and serenade me through an intercom...
Loud Cancer
2008-05-17
ch 1,
abuseIt's funny and sweet. (: I would love it if a guy did all those things for me xD Original and nice.:D great job.
starlit x sky
2008-05-14
ch 1,
abuseAww that was really good!
Hmm, I'm curious to know his name now haha.
This was really original, and that's what I liked about it.
Great job!
CK Shorty
2008-05-08
ch 1,
abuseI loved it from beginning to
end!! IF ONLY...that could
happen in real life =[..if only.
:) Great job.
thoughtsofwisdom
2008-05-06
ch 1,
abusethat was so cute, and i didnt even realise that i didn't learn his name. but that was seriously adorable
gulistanlik
2008-05-04
ch 1,
abuseAw! This was incredibly cute! The guy, Sam, everything! It was again also humourous. I really like that. I going to check out your other stuff too.

gulistanlik
Salt and Vinegar Pringles
2008-05-03
ch 1,
abuseCute little one-shot! Shame we didn't get to know his name, though!
By the bye... Jason Mraz is top-notch! Utterly pleased that you put the lyrics for I'm Yours up. Love that song!
Lily Llynn
2008-04-30
ch 1,
abuseEw evil! Not telling us his name! Rawr!
But yes, fluffy and cute and well-written, as usual. I especially liked this one because it's creative and unlike most romance stories, doesn't feature high school kids! Hahhaa. Awesome oneshot as usual, and I'm glad that Queen of Absolutely Everything added it to our c2. (:
EnChAnTeD-KoReAn
2008-04-27
ch 1,
abusedefinately a real cute story...i loved the fact that you left his name out even til the end of the story...nice fluff!!
deny.me.not
2008-04-26
ch 1,
abuseOh my godd, that was absolutely adorable. I wish someone would do that for mee, I'm so jealous of her. Haha. I like it that you didn't reveal his name, it adds some mystery, yum. I love Mr. Dork, he's so cute.

I look forward to your next one.

-dmn.
d666lisa
2008-04-25
ch 1,
abuseExcellent oneshot, very original :)
Venus Smurf1
2008-04-24
ch 1,
abuseThis was absolutely adorable and absolutely hilarious. I'm awed by your skill.
justalilcrazy
2008-04-23
ch 1,
abuseYes, it's me again. And yes, I'm going to start raving about your one shot again. Sigh. Same old stuff. Anyway, I LOVED it..again...and BE NICE AND TELL ME HIS NAME!!...please?? pretty please with a chocolate sundae on top?..hehe...
How come my delivery guys are always old and...well..old..? As in, like, 30 something. Tough luck, huh? Anyway, tell me his name!
But, yeah, Loved it!! :):)
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