oh...*sniff*...that was really good! Poor Kent though...i miss him...but good job nevertherless!

Keep on writing!

Midnight-Wolfe

Very good!

I think that Silvertongue is the best story you've written yet, but this one is also a good one. It's better than I'll ever do, anyway...

I agree with dpbclover, that the fact that the main character died was..."good". Most authors dont do that.

That was a very...interesting story. It was sort of like goosebumps. I liked that Kent died. Most stories don't kill off the main character. Once again, Good Job!