Although I did love the rhyming scheme - it was so origonal! And I did love the subject matter as well, because it was really sweet and funny, I have to berate you one one thing, because I'm just like that -[people tut]-

I think that this poem suffered for it's formatting/font-facing. Don't italicize future poems - they just make them harder to read, honest! And you don't need it to get peoples' attention, with the content of your poems (if there all as refreshing as this one!) you won't need it.

- Clap Trap, from Review Marathon [link in my profile]

I love this! It's just so brilliant!!

Peace & Love

westnedge ~> park