Reviews for last kiss of first lovers

no.peace.los.angeles 2008-05-02 ch 1,	abuseI like the way you wrote this; it's different than a lot of poetry out there. And it uses dialogue, which can be really hard to pull off. I think you did a great job with it, though. The lack of punctuation bothers me, but that's a personal preference. Sometimes I think I like my punctuation a little too much. Regardless, it's a lovely, heartbreaking poem. Keep writing! :)
Manuel Fajar 2008-04-21 ch 1,	abuseA first kiss is joy’s true delight With memories that last all time Lips touching lips make night seem bright Tips reaching tips make all words rhyme Until dark day when comes insight That lust is only an enzyme Causing doubts to replace delight Then love becomes faint pantomime