Gorgeous piece. I love the simplicity of it, but the interwoven complexities ("each with their/own set of/circumstances") as well. Lovely lovely. Keep writing! :)

very good, solid pieces :) good job! keep it up.
Faith

This is not your average ''weight of the world on my shoulders'' poem. Because the way you wrote the first three lines are like you have everything under control. I thought that was great. Keep it Up!