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| Doubting Thomas 2008-04-23 ch 1,  | abuseGood poem, nice ryming. but I dont agree with it. We soldiers cry too, we cry when our buddies die. |
| Bazooka Joy 2008-04-22 ch 1, | abuseThis poem may offend those who are in the military and or support the war 110%...it's ridiculous. I guess yeah, the media shows us the bad parts and we will never truly knows exactly what they go through and what their reasons are for being over there unless we are in the military. But nevertheless, I'm against war just as you are. Senseless. |
| Ashley Lampost 2008-04-21 ch 1, | abusePeace isn’t won by war Peace is won by strife Peace comes from the heart No the edge of a knife I really liked that line of this poem, along with the rest of it. That line just stood out at me... |
| Undrahas 2008-04-21 ch 1, | abuseThe soldiers hate being over there, and hate it when they are ordered to go over there. They fight for there country, and everything. It doesn't mean they like to fight. They hate it. Their families pray to God to bring them back safely. In my opinion we don't thank the soldiers enough for serving. We need to. We need to thank all of the soldiers for sercving. Weather its retired, or still active. They risk there lives, but are not thanked by American Soldiers. Sorry got a little carried away in my personal views. Anyway, very nice poem. I also like this one. |
| Lost In Oblivion 2008-04-20 ch 1, | abuseTo me, it seems as if this piece of writing is influenced by the media. Of course freedom does come with a price, and that currency is blood. It’s a nice poem though. |
| Random-Idiocity 2008-04-20 ch 1, | abuseThis was great. We all have different view points on the army and war, but I think you we were right with this ''Peace comes from the heart'' wonderful piece. Keep it Up! |