"She wanted to scream and wail, but nebulous amounts of emotions formed a huge constraint in her heart."

I don't think I could have found a more awesome first sentence. This whole story was pretty cool, but that first sentence (and the last for that matter) really tied the whole thing together. Kudos!

This is touching and sad. It gets me really into the feeling of her. This is the best piece of writing I have ever read. NO joke. I hope you plan on continuing it!