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Reviews For: At the end of the sidewalk

zutaraforever181
2008-05-05
ch 1,
abuse"She wanted to scream and wail, but nebulous amounts of emotions formed a huge constraint in her heart."

I don't think I could have found a more awesome first sentence. This whole story was pretty cool, but that first sentence (and the last for that matter) really tied the whole thing together. Kudos!
reeselynrose
2008-04-21
ch 1,
abuseThis is touching and sad. It gets me really into the feeling of her. This is the best piece of writing I have ever read. NO joke. I hope you plan on continuing it!
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