Reviews for At the end of the sidewalk

zutaraforever181 2008-05-05 ch 1,	abuse"She wanted to scream and wail, but nebulous amounts of emotions formed a huge constraint in her heart." I don't think I could have found a more awesome first sentence. This whole story was pretty cool, but that first sentence (and the last for that matter) really tied the whole thing together. Kudos!
reeselynrose 2008-04-21 ch 1,	abuseThis is touching and sad. It gets me really into the feeling of her. This is the best piece of writing I have ever read. NO joke. I hope you plan on continuing it!