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| fairytale failure 2008-04-25 ch 1,  | abuseThis piece sounds sad, and sort of bitter. I really liked the part about how love being typed out shows how it changes - that's a really original thought. A lot of this poem sounds more personal to you but it was enjoyable to read. |
| Faith Adeline 2008-04-21 ch 1, | abusegreat piece, really good work. Sometimes. . .it's better to lose what you don't need than hang on to them. It hurts more, but does you better in the long run. Je ne sais pas, I am sorry though if this is a "true" piece. Faith |