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| zutaraforever181 2008-04-22 ch 1,  | abuseWow... Really good! And the title fits in really well! I have major issues with titles sometime, and yours, it just sounds so... so cool, you know? And not to mention how well written it is. There are two main types of writing: 1 straight forward (ex: The Twilight Series (HIGHLY RECOMMEND!)). Stephenie Meyer is an expert at that kind of writing, and it's really, really beautiful! 2: Descriptive: Where the author uses big or unusual words, lots of alliterations, metaphors, similes, etc. (ex: The Rowan Hood Tales (SO GOD!)) Nancy Springer does an excellent job with this!! Yours, I think, is straight forward. Really great writing, and not loaded with descriptive words. p.s. I don't know whether this was the effect intended, but, dang, if your story didn't make me hungry!! It made me want to have a really greasy slice of pizza! Is-Is that good?? |