I'm sorry AGAIN for being a total failure and not reviewing sooner!

I actually really love what Katie did to that Trent guy xD I think she's amazing. I also agree with her. I definitely think something happened between Preston and Billy. Especially because of the way they interacted with each other.

“He doesn’t . . . He doesn’t want to have my babies!”-- xDD that made me laugh.

There'd better be an update soon! Or I'll have to kill someone.
Not really xD But seriously. Update!

Aw, I loved this :)it was beautiful

Well it has been SOME. TIME. since you last updated O__O.
I had to re-read the last chapter to remember what was going on!

I'd totally forgotten just how charming your dialogue can be :). Well, Katie's dialogue. I like how intuitive she is :), and her tenacity. I just...like her really xD. Especially the line "It only makes sense that you’d have someone hiding in a closet somewhere…so to speak."

The only part I really have issue with is Preston and Billy's re-union. I'm not so sure that you'd just be like 'ok, give me your number. I'll see you again in another 3 years'? Ok, I over-exaggerated, but what I meant was: they didn't even seem to try and catch up with one another?!

But I like where you're going with this! :D And I can't wait until you update again.

Katie makes me laugh :) Keep it up!
Faith

YAY! i'm so glad you're writing! it's getting interesting!! :D

Oh yay! I'm glad Billy didn't pull away in the end :D

And we can all deal with the chapter being shorter! At least you're actually able to update something! And we're all glad when you do ^_^

I really wish there was more though! D:
I think I forgot to mention how creepy Ethan's stalker-person is :O Hopefully he'll get his ass kicked! xD

This was a cute chapter and I hope to read more soon!

Oh.My.Gee.
I am so sorry I didn't get to this when you updated! I fail as a reviewer.

I went back and re-read chapter 9, and I'm glad you added more to it. I really like Ethan's mom!

I don't like Billy's dad, which I'm sure I've said before. He makes me angry. I want to throw things at him.

I love Billy and Ethan's relationship. It's so sweet! And for some reason "smitten kitten" made me giggle :D I think it's cute xD

uh oh! Where are they? lol. I liked it. One thing, when you're quoting in diologue, you use ' '. Which is pretty much the only time you use those. So this, "Cute?" What happened to beautiful?" becomes, "'Cute'? What happened to beautiful?" Like that :) Keep it up and update soon!
Faith

Aw. Pure cuteness (with or without the bed sheet). :) I'm woundering though: What are the kid's gonna think about Billy? hopefully, they respect him and get over it, but you know stories, "Without the conflict, you have no story." Cant wait for more.

omg. i love this story! update plz!! it has very good flow and a wonderful storyline. not to mention the characters are hott as hell! =) i shall be waiting! (yeah im a dork)

naaww, shoo cute

Aww, I love it. Its so cute and sweet. The whole story in general, that is. Then, of course, theres those -oh-my-god-hot-mansmex- moments and its just like hot chocolate /melts/. Hmm, thanks Mizery for the tasty analogy. Anywayz, man, I love this. The way you use words, and stuff. Oh, but you say their names way too much. Just sayin.

Yay! Billy is accepting his gayness, or that was a fluke... who cares it was a sexy chapter. That makes up for no updating,definitely.

Kay. I heart you too. I gotta update your story.

Oh, yay, thank you, thank you, thank you! I'm so excited to have another chapter of this story, even if it is short. But definitely short and sweet! I hope the bookstore is going well, and I'm definitely looking forward to reading more!

So I was checking out your writing after seeing you had reviewed my story - thanks so much for that by the way, it meant a lot! :) - and I started to read this, and then i figured out I'd read it before, but when I checked your reviews i saw that I hadnt read the last chapter, I only got up to chapter 10 so apologies for the late review because i cant have gotten the alert through

I cant believe someone whose story I liked so much liked one of my own!

This was really good, just like the rest :) It was well balanced. I hope his dad sint going to get him to prove he can run 12.2 miles :| I cant wait for more of this,its so well written!