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| Imaginary Strangers 2008-04-21 ch 1,  | abuseIn all honesty, I got very little from this poem. But the flow just caused me to read on and on and on until I got to the end and discovered that I remembered nothing and yet felt everything. Which makes me smile because to me, that's poetry. You will most likely be unsatisfied with this review, despite my praise, because we all want to hear that our words are conveyed in such a way that there is something BIG beneath them; as if our thoughts are concrete and right and will be discovered to be philosophies and ideologies that everyone will make for themselves after finding the real truths. Nonetheless, I really did enjoy your poem, and thank you for writing it. |
| MandyMisfit 2008-04-21 ch 1, | abusesounds like nothing but ryhming words. I mean i get the concept but it's a bit boring because it ryhms too much. i feel but it's good and i like it |