a thought provoking poem, especially the last line. Great job. But perhaps you should have more line breaks at the commas? Just a thought.

I really enjoy reading your poetry, it's so creative and beautiful. :)

I like the descriptions a lot. They are really beautiful. I also love the whole idea about a hymn about a tulip. That was nice. At some parts though it seemed that you might have gone overboard with the commas. And I also got confused by two things: capitalizing rebel (only once) and the self-assured he assures myself (I'm assuming it's the tulip assuring you, but then isn't he just assuring you, not yourself? I thought myself is only if your doing something to yourself, but maybe Im wrong)

Anyhow, really beautiful piece.