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| Ms. Critic 2008-06-06 ch 1,  | abuseWell, I will try to let the comment about Mormons not being Christians slide, and I thought the poem was very nice. Knowing I am a Child of God is a very important part of my life, and this poem just kind of speaks to me. Thanks Jon! |
| The.Wizard.Pen.Dragon 2008-05-18 ch 1, | abuseI'm gonna guess that you're a Mormon not a Christian like me after that, but if I look at it just from a poetic perspetive, it was pretty good. It probably would have flowed better if it had been separated into stanzas, it almost seemed more like dialoge this way. |
| fleur de l'est 2008-04-27 ch 1, | abuseAww.. this is just sweet! Well done! |
| Bob Evans 2008-04-21 ch 1, | abuseThat's right, Jonny boy! You go for it! |