Hmm...flippers. I like it. Mind if I coin the term? (I can credit you--haha, I'll get weird looks if I just say "Orange Sheep of the Flock" without explaining more: your penname rocks)
I like your confused-gopher-spouting girl, too, but I really love the narrator! His thoughts also meander all over the place, but in a logical-like way, and we can tell he's smart/creative, too, and possibly just a tad antisocial but 'tis 'cause he's not a conformist n'stuff...yeah, it's hard to describe. You did a better job, I think :) But I can relate to him!

Did I ever tell you how amazing you are? You're just amazing. And this story is so cute and sad and fluffy and...It's like a little Shetland pony.

Wow, very nice! It was a bit hard to follow the POV changes at times, but still, very goo overall! Write more soon.
**Courtney

Hi so I decided to come over here too don't know if I'll be writing much on this account though.

Neat little story if a bit vague but that might have been what you were aiming for.

M~ Super Drive. ;3

This was really cute~ I love the fact that the girl isn't a whiny bitch (I don't usually read het, friendship or otherwise, just to let you know ;D) and the guy isn't a total asshole. XD;; They were adorable. (The fact that I'm a total Otaku doesn't have anything to do with this, I swear! xD) And it really reminded me of my friendship with some of my precious boys~ :D

But I was disappointed to see that you have no other stories up. D: I really wanna read more from you~ :D You have a very lovely style that's very smooth and flows oh-so nicely. :3

I'm putting you on my Author Alert. ;] I wanna see more~! :D

x

PS: I love Kaito, too. :3

Wow...

I REALLY like this story. It's really simple, but it has a lot of meaning. Please write more like this!