another sweet one! this one's amazing too! :)

'Pretending to be mute,'

my favorite line. I don't know why, but it's just so gorgeous. (:

I like this poem. It's nice (:

hey hey! sweet poem you got there!

just a little comment, im not sure if it was meant to be like that but ur settings had changed alot, from a beach to a lake and from sunset to morning.

but other than that pretty sweet! ) naw