I really like this story for all its cheesy, fluffy and unrealistic qualities. This would actually make an extremely good picture book.
You really developed the Princess from being quite a selfish creature, so I think you need to express that change a little more.
Much love,
Georgia

...that was sweet... usually i dont like that crap but i guess this story is an exception.

=]

peace.

Really liked this! Sure, the plot was a little unrealistic, but isn't that the point of a fairy tale? It was certainly very enjoyable to read. ^_^ This story reminded me of Beauty and the Beast, actually, in the best possible way. The writing was excellent; I thought you blended just the right amount of description and dialogue. My only criticism is... would the king really make the daughter his heir? Wasn't it usually the practice for a male to take the throne? Also... I was a little confused by the line "Opening her eyes wide in fear, the tiny glass shards entered." Are the glass shards opening her eyes? I feel like you could word that line a little better.

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this one was alright. i think the line "the knight took the princess’s delicate form in his arms and kissed every single tear that streamed down her perfect cheeks" was over kill though. too cheesy. i was fine with the rest of it though. it reminded me of disney princesses. the first time you talked about the princess not listening in church it made me think of you though.

this is so sweet! i love it. i'm really touched

I think it needs more details on the princess's and knight's reasoning on why and how they fell for each other. You can add silly and awkward moments. You can also add some remarks or thoughts of the princess's vainness in choosing for a knight or the knight's pity for the princess high end but shallow life...

ever the crazy cynic huh?

heh.this was sweet.
though i didn't really understand how she found him 'the most beautiful thing' after her bandages come off..

aw! it was beautiful! they're so cute! ^^-Salem

aww !! it's cute :)
it should be made into a little picture book thing hehe.
except i was hoping for more detail on their relationship but it's okay !

it was adorable and fluffy !!
great workk

Aww, how cute. (:

I like how the princess seemed like a spoiled brat in the beginning but got better toward the end. The ending is very nice, too. I like how getting to know this knight changed her and let her experience different types of beauty.

All in all, nicely composed!