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| ThisIsMyDecember 2008-08-14 ch 7,  | abuseI really like this story. The way Boe and Vedrun interact is great. I can't believe Boe actually managed to track down the guy who gave Vedrun the bell (even if he doesn't know it). So Brogan got a little upset there at the end. He probably knows who the bell is for already. I wonder if he feels guilty? Poor Vedrun he didn't get his present. I was wondering if he was going to mention it. I wonder if the bell is going to make things better or worse. Knowing Vedrun things are probably going to get intense and not in a good way. So yeah I really like reading your story. |
| Rock Music is my Muse 2008-04-26 ch 3, | abuseVery well written. Homosexuality is a delicate subject these days, yet you use it freely with a second glance. --Alex |