Another great story. Completely unique. I read it in one sitting, even though I really ought to have gone to bed. :)

Odd thing... one of my main characters is named Brogan. If I can dig up that Babydoll story, I'll post it, but I have the horrible feeling that it was on my laptop when it was stolen, a milion years ago.

Well, my friend, my interested has been piqued.

I like the way the story is playing out. I really, really like the characters (especially Boe. His borderline obsession is sort of...cute?) and I love the interactions that take place.

It's twisted in a good way. I will be watching.

I really like this story. The way Boe and Vedrun interact is great.

I can't believe Boe actually managed to track down the guy who gave Vedrun the bell (even if he doesn't know it). So Brogan got a little upset there at the end. He probably knows who the bell is for already. I wonder if he feels guilty?

Poor Vedrun he didn't get his present. I was wondering if he was going to mention it. I wonder if the bell is going to make things better or worse. Knowing Vedrun things are probably going to get intense and not in a good way.

So yeah I really like reading your story.

Very well written. Homosexuality is a delicate subject these days, yet you use it freely with a second glance.
--Alex