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| .mate.feed.kill.repeat. 2008-04-21 ch 1,  | abuseEh... boring. Numerals again, dear. 2 would be better off written as "two." And the apostrophes. You missed a few apostrophes. (You know I'm going to keep telling you to fix it until you do something about them. Haha.) Mom should also be capitalized because it is being used as a name. You know what I just realized? I'm way too good at this. =] ily. -stix- |