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Reviews For: A Planet Called Dirt

Nearly Dead
2008-05-14
ch 4, anon.
abuseOnce again, I'm impressed by your originality. Some parts really made me laugh, and I like the suspense at the end of the chapter.
InkAngyl
2008-05-10
ch 4,
abuseYay! I like it! Keep writing! And thanks for warning me about it... i have been getting lazy about checking my emails lately.
Beast King
2008-05-09
ch 2,
abuseThis is kind of creepy...
Beast King
2008-05-09
ch 1,
abusewow...i don't know if the narrator is good or evil...definately faving this one.
openheadspace
2008-05-09
ch 4,
abuseAH! NO! Oh man...this is getting intensely!
Can't wait for the chapter five! Until next time, Ill be eating grapes. :)
InkAngyl
2008-04-30
ch 3,
abuseI like it, but it does need to be a bit longer. But i think you know that, you mentioned it at the end of the chapter. Just thought i would tell you that you were right about it being short. It took me less than 5 minutes to read, when it should really take longer so that the reader can get into the storyline.

Good luck,
Ink
InkAngyl
2008-04-30
ch 2,
abuseI leave you alone for 2 days (or something like that) and you go and get 5 more reveiws. How can i trust you after something like that? Huh? HUH?

Just kidding. Anyways. I just got the chance to start reading again and so i'm back for more! I'm like this story a lot. I can't really find anything that bothered me about this chapter... so you're off the hook! I guess i'll just talk to you later then.

I'm happy that you're starting to form a larger audience. When you become rich and famous someday for writing books i promise i'll be the biggest jerk on your fansites. I'll remind everyone over and over that i was the first to reveiw you EVER until everybody on the site knows me by name and hates me equally. It'll be so much fun.

hehe. I guess I'll talk to you later then!

Most annoying person on ur future fansites,
Ink
openheadspace
2008-04-27
ch 3,
abusehahahaha, I liked it. The last two sentences were a bit choppy though. Like..."OH YEAH! Here's something that you still need to think about." And then POOF. It's there.
Nearly Dead
2008-04-27
ch 3, anon.
abuseThis is such an interesting idea. I've never seen it used before. I like how you separate her thoughts from what's happening to Holly using italics. It gives the story an unusual perspective.
Chip Douglas
2008-04-27
ch 3,
abuseFantastic! The form is really clever, and I like how the narrator's host becomes more and more significant as the story goes. It is a little slow moving; by chapter 3 we still don't have a hint of what the real conflict is going to be, although the we have already had a fight, which was pretty fun. I guess it all depends on how long you intend to make this story. Keep going with it, I'm interested to see where you're going with this.
JadeRoach
2008-04-24
ch 2,
abuseI wanna get something off my mind...


THANK YOU FOR REVIEWING 'CRY OF ATLANTIS'! (Ok, I'm done!)

Next is that I wanna say that this story has potential. MUCH potential. Keep it up and I may have to start breaking a sweat or two to keep my reviewers!
openheadspace
2008-04-24
ch 2,
abuseOh, man. I LOVE THIS. It's original (for me at least) and funny as hell (Dirt? Wicked). I hope you keep going with it!
InkAngyl
2008-04-22
ch 1,
abuseYay! I'm back! Hey. I like this story too! I'm almost afraid of the Trainers/Slayers... kill your soul and stretch your body. Yuck. But whatever the case... I left you another email so i thought i should remind you to check it!
Keep Writing!
Ink

P.S. In the email i sent you i'm gonna adivise you on how to get more reveiws! Think you could use that... i feel like your only audience!
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