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satc 2008-06-07 ch 4, anon.	abusehmm... i can't think of anything to say, but... it may just be me, but this chappie seemed to go just a little too fast... if that makes sense ugh, it's late. bedtime for me! snore
satc 2008-05-14 ch 3, anon.	abuseHmm... scratches head You suddenly went from 3rd person POV to 1st at the end there. It was a little strange. Don't know if you did that on purpose or what but yeah, it was very sudden and strange, especially when everything else that has happened has been in 3rd. Anyway, Jeralin still has an adorable suicidal thing going on. He's just so cute about it!
satc 2008-04-29 ch 2, anon.	abuseahahahaahaha... ahem. he sure is bitchier when he's not trying to off himself. oh yeah, something i forgot to mention about the first chapter, improvement-wise. a little over-usage of jeralin's name. no problems on this chappie though. hmm, i guess he knows all those random things unintentionally...poor guy; that would suck ^^
kris932 2008-04-23 ch 1,	abuseI found Jeralin to be a very charming sort of anti-hero. It was a amusing chapter and I can't wait to see more.
satc 2008-04-22 ch 1, anon.	abuse...he's suicidal and yet, so cute about it. nice