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| .mate.feed.kill.repeat. 2008-04-21 ch 1,  | abuseShorter than most, but I like it. I would advise you format "FEEL" in the fourth line differently, though. The capitalization just doesn't ...feel... right. Italics, maybe? The last line fits really nicely with this. Except for the apostrophes! =\ Dork. Good job. ily. -stix- |