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| Regin 2008-09-21 ch 2,  | abuseI Like, I lust, I Love!!Please Update Soon!! |
| Elf Ear 2008-09-19 ch 1, | abuse“Like what? Selling it to a collection agency?” She raised an alarmed eyebrow. was that meant to be 'he'? anyway, this sounds interesting, but pls update illusoire soon! |
| honey splattered brains 2008-09-16 ch 2, | abusenuu. dont end it. ): as sad as it sounds, caitlin + scott are cool. ): |
| Audra Hornaday 2008-09-16 ch 2, | abuseA most excellent story so far. I can't wait to see where it goes. I definitely liked that she called him at 3am. I did get a little lost in the first chapter when you started describing being a take it or leave it girl just because it seemed like the story started out third person limited (and I had to look these up b/c I couldn't remember what they were called) but then went to third person omniscient. But that could just be me being tired. Either way, very funny and good start. |
| noram 2008-09-16 ch 2, anon. | abuseah. man when i saw you updated i had to do a double check. now this was just plain cruel i tell ya. you gave us les than 20 sentences. granted-- they were good sentences. but still.. you tease you! |
| Kjersti 2008-09-16 ch 2, anon. | abuseHow cute. Or just incredibly annoying. Can't wait to read more. This is entertaining. :D |
| Somedaymydreamswillcome 2008-09-15 ch 2, | abusehahahah I love it even if it was, admittably, short. lol. Very cute banter. :D |
| Lauren 2008-09-15 ch 1, anon. | abuseHey, have you posted this previously? I am positive I've read this before. |
| Birds and Boats 2008-09-15 ch 2, | abuseyeah i love honest people, they have the most interesting things to say. I enjoyed it |
| ess3sandra 2008-09-15 ch 2, | abusedefinitely too short, but hey, always a pleasure. |
| Lorei 2008-09-15 ch 2, anon. | abuseI loved it :D |
| cbprice25 2008-09-14 ch 2, | abuseIt is super short, but nevertheless, ** awesome. Looking forward to more! |
| Sailor 2008-09-14 ch 2, anon. | abuseHaha, that was great! That's so funny. I found that same annoyance when I took a guy's number and I was like, "Damn, now I have to call him!" Short and...well, sweet is probably the wrong word... ;) |
| Sailor 2008-09-14 ch 1, anon. | abuseWow, she is a total **. But this is a very good chapter. Your writing style is REALLY good, your grammar is impeccable, and it's just really good. Kudos to you! |
| Jacoblover 2008-09-14 ch 2, | abusei love this story!! i'm so glad you finally updated. caitlin is amazing, best character i've read about so far. update super soon please! |