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| Sofia Lemos da Costa 2008-06-15 ch 2, | abuseThis was sweet. Really short though. And I got a little confused... In my head Matt was a "big boy", and Ryan was more of the skinny small kind, but Ryan seemed to be the one taking care of the other... Matt seemed to be more of the "weak" in their relationship... Idk, it kinda confused me x) It's good though =) |
| Jesse Colton 2008-06-12 ch 2, | abuseOh...my...freakin...wow. When he said "I know. I can't either." I started crying a little. This story is sweet, powerful, and more importantly it shows just how bad it is for gay people, which means that you're also doing something to make a difference with it. Only small problem I saw with it was a grammatical error: "You can't catch you, you assholes." I think is supposed to say you can't catch IT? I think it's an awesome story, I love the happy ending. Oh yeah, and random fact: my favorite part is when Ryan says "I'm going to take care of you Matt. Always." |
| Jesse Colton 2008-06-12 ch 1, | abuseI just finished part 1, I'm going to go straight to part 2. Wow, this is just awesome. There's always something really cool about two guys who've been best friends discovering their in love. It's also really hot! And I love the sweet tender moments they have, especially when Ryan carries Matt up the stairs. Did I mention it was hot? I can't wait to see part two!! |
| Sippy Cup 2008-06-03 ch 2, | abuseI loved your other slash story, so of course I adore this one. You're amazing! Keep up the great work! |
| Koyu 2008-04-24 ch 1, | abuseFaith! I love that you wrote this story. XD It's so good. You should write more yaoi..or well, write me more yaoi. Love love love. |
| soulful eyes 2008-04-24 ch 2, | abusenot bad! I liked it I'd make the sex a little more detailed though. It was thier first time after all. Talk about thoughts,fears, sights, sensations, sounds. A little dirty talk. That's what a first time is all about fear and fun right ? Good Luck! |