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| Lady E 2008-06-05 ch 1,  | abuseWhat a funny poem, brimming with a tired sort of irony. If writer's block inspires you to wry, mocking poetry that is everything it complains is lacking in others, I'd love to see what comes from your pen when you're riding a wave of inspiration. The summary and the last two lines are fantastic, and the imagery of the first stanza sinuously beautiful. |
| simpleplan13 2008-05-17 ch 1, | abuseI like this a lot... though I'm sure a lot of my pieces fall into pieces that wouldn't satisfy what you want. I love the ending... those last two lines are a funny way to end a piece that might offend people. The point of the piece is also well explained and relateable since everyone has types of pieces they look down on. I also love you word choice with wonky enjambment. The only that I didn't like was with that phrase I kinda wanted it to be plural or have an a in front. Really great piece. |
| Unknown Sorrow 2008-05-05 ch 1, | abuseI think as readers and writers, we're all agreeing with you on this one. I'm currently in search of good compositions to read... |
| Arcane D. 2008-05-04 ch 1, | abuseme too. i want to read something real and write something real. arcane |
| Almsivi 2008-04-23 ch 1, | abuseI agree with your poem. It was really good, and I loved seeing the word "blasé" - I haven't seen it used in awhile. The last stanza was amusing, too. But the a/n was something that I think could have been a last line of the poem, rather than seperate. Anyway, great job! |
| Random-Idiocity 2008-04-22 ch 1, | abuseThis was great. I love how you portray this to relate with writers block. And excellent choice of words too, makes this piece that much better. Keep it Up! |