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| Nemonus 2008-04-25 ch 1,  | abuseOh, good! Full of the serenity that the best haikus have, and tis such a clever idea/picture! Quirky and comforting. The line break at "night-" is a little odd, but I can see that it was needed to make the haiku work. Very good. |
| lookin4nemo 2008-04-24 ch 1, | abusethis is probaly my fav hakui! |
| Faith Adeline 2008-04-22 ch 1, | abusevery good piece! I love writing about the moon, and I think you got the emotion across very good :) Faith |
| alittlebitconfused 2008-04-22 ch 1, | abuseReally nice :) You captured the emotion really well in your haiku, which, personally, I find nearly impossible to do... I really like it |