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candykillz
2008-07-13
ch 5,
abusethat was all so... cute! haha, i love dev and reesee!=P
Ngoc1231
2008-07-06
ch 5,
abuseAww this was cute! The scene that was discarded in chapter 23, hahaha I actually thought she would say that they were going to the park instead of Taylor's house.
~*~Ngoc1231~*~
xXxGolden-DryadxXx
2008-05-21
ch 5,
abuseWow I'm so glad you posted that! I love TCC a lot and I was happy to see more about it!!
x.betweenthelines
2008-05-13
ch 3,
abuseLOL.
I was all WTF!?!

Nevertheless, I thought it was funny. ^^
Listerine
2008-05-07
ch 5,
abuseAH. In keeping with the terms of the bet, this is the last chapter of this story I have to review! :D HAHA. And, whoa, love it. Love it. Positively. Awesomeliciously. God. Stop writing about hot guys, I'm having estrogen overload right here. Right here.

-starts frothing at the mouth- Meh. WHY must you create characters like this?! I have to set narcs on you, you're raising my hopes of finding a nice guy :/ -whines a little more-

"yearning for since the day I set eyes upon his dirty, scuffed little form – something that changed his face in the most magical way possible." Bah. Mush. I love it. I hate being a girl sometimes :/
Random Word Artist
2008-04-29
ch 5,
abuse“Reese, have you seen my p—WHAT THE FUCK??”
Wasn’t he supposed to fly at Dev in a blinding rage and beat the crap out of him?

Those were the best lines. They made me crack up so hard. I loved this scene! I liked how it began with a fight and ended with a kiss (or two). Good job! Are there any more?
little purple dinosaur
2008-04-28
ch 5,
abuseGreat job! 'Nuff said. :)

I miss this story so much...but your new one's great too! Please update Once Bitten, Twice Forgotten. I can't wait!
cls81690
2008-04-28
ch 5,
abuseAgain with the crashing lips!
And the dying sun, now, too! Poor sun, it's not ITS fault it got fatal melanoma! Wait...
Heady scent...surrendered...demanding, passionate, hungry...grenades? Sweet! Napoleon, wow, that was hilariously awesome and horrible. Sensuously...moan...larynx hahaha...long black locks...caress...his touch burned against my skin like hot embers in a dying fire, the darkness falling over us...wow, this is comedy. I'm sorry. The harlequin-y stuff makes me laugh. But you do it quite well! And, you do the less-cliche stuff even better.
It's been a delight.
cls81690
2008-04-28
ch 4,
abuseActually, I think this is excellent. Very clear writing. I like it.
jekodama
2008-04-27
ch 3,
abuseHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAH! Ah, that was precious, truly precious!
SimplyBelievingJan
2008-04-27
ch 5,
abuseThis scene is really cute! Chapter 3 was a bit shocking and good thing it didnt make it. But all the other chapters, I really like them. Too bad that they didnt make it into the story though. I did really miss the characters of TCC. I hope you'd write a Jared/Taylor spin-off. hehe. Good luck. xD
artistic dreamer
2008-04-26
ch 5,
abuseaww...that's all the discarded scenes you have? :( but you're too good of an author to have too many discarded scenes :) haha
this one was cute! how they were arguing and stuff and they in two seconds got engaged in a heavy make out session hahaha. if only if the real story did devon apply to nyu would that be perfect. as much as i love your real ending just the way it is, i always like perfectly happy endings where everything is solved and reese and devon isn't separated by a couple of hours :) hahah, but i stil like this scene! please do write a Jared/Taylor one shot!! pretty pretty please! and include lots of Devon and Reese in it too! hahah.
now i'm curious about And He Never Did Change. :) i hope you change your mind and put the chapters up so i can read more of your work :)
bye for now!

Green.Winged.Mistress
2008-04-26
ch 5,
abuseAww! That was awesome! But a sad aww too, because theres no more :( You really should do the Jared/Taylor (Or Romeo and Juliet :D I like to think of them as that now :P) spin-off one-shot. It would be really good! Even though I have no idea what your going to do in it!

-Katie
katieee
2008-04-26
ch 5,
abuseAwh, I loved it! :] I especially loved how you ended it. They are so cute togetherr.
LondonLi
2008-04-26
ch 5, anon.
abuseThanks for the outtakes! Even if not part of the final product, I love reading about their relationship. And I'm enjoying your new story too!
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