|Reviews for Wherefore Art Thou Discarded Scenes?|
| audioboxer 4/25/08 . chapter 4
Daddy-Long-Legs! AAH, you've read that book? SO AWESOME :D Love it, love it, love it! And 'It's not so much of want. Maybe a need.'
GAH! So beautiful and romantic!
I've just realized that I hate you with a passion. You just cant get away with creating SUPERFLY guys like Devon and raising my faith in the male gender when they so obviously stink. Gah.
And I'm procrastinating. I STILL have writer's block and it's.. ! I feel inadequate about that ;) AND OMG SOMEONE PICKED THE 'TCC SUCKED' OPTION? Haha, don't let your heart die! Crazy bitch, ) I bet she couldn't read! Why the hell did you even put that option up? :D And that was like..swearing overload. Sorry. I'm stressed right now and have a million and one things to do that I'm procrastinating / As usual :D
| Acantha 4/25/08 . chapter 4
Hey, hey, Cantha here, just a little too lazy to sign in today. I like the extra tidbits of the gang-I missed them a lot. Just to point out a tiny error I found, you wrote, "...ever single fiber...", but I think you meant "...every single fiber..."
Typos are fun to catch, aren't they? I found three in Twilight-ballet bar-barre (twice) and two week. I'm getting obsessed with finding typos these days, as well as Sarah Dessen? Have you read any of her books? The new one came out Tuesday, and I'm like, lusting to have it.
Anyways, great "hearing" from them. And I promise I will try not to rant in reviews anymore.
| Hopelessly Cliche 4/25/08 . chapter 4
Aw, that was a cute chapter! I love the bit about the 'thinking' it was funny!
Update soon! :D
| simplicity is complex 4/25/08 . chapter 4
AYE I LIKE THIS SCENE! you should have put it in after they went to taylor's house. like. instead of bringing her home he brought her to the playground. YAR. cause its so. YAR for them to discuss it in the elementary school playground! like. ah
| Tiger-Sparks 4/25/08 . chapter 4
So Dev has freaky mind reading powers now? Cool xD
"“Jared’s not a problem,” he said quietly, so quietly that I almost didn’t hear him." You know, for some reason, that made me think that Dev had killed him...it just sounds like it! Like, he's aliminated him because he could cause trouble. He's Bond, Dev Bond.
Hehe, can't wait for the last scene!
| Tecna 4/25/08 . chapter 4
You were going to kill Jared? What were you thinking? I am so glad that you decided not to, otherwise I would've come after your head!
Sorry for not reviewing sooner, been really busy with work, but all four chapters are amazing, I loved each and every one of them. It's like the discarded scenes of a movie, in places where things have gone wrong. But I'm still glad you decided not to kill Jared!
In two weeks, I have college finals will be busy for a month,just wanted to let you know if I become MIA for a month and you don't hear from me.
| J.C. Lyn 4/25/08 . chapter 4
I think aloud at times. xD
Yes. You evil girl. D:
| J. C. Hunter 4/25/08 . chapter 4
thank goodness you didn't put THIS in. i love the part where she said she loved him. the one in school. it's so much much much nicer than THIS. but somehow you manage to make them stay in character even as you make them do WEIRD stuff. (yes that's a compliment.) haha.
| tobrenwatson03 4/24/08 . chapter 3
LOL! Poor Jared! Thank goodness that didn't really happen! :P
| queen-of-the-sand-castle 4/24/08 . chapter 3
That...was dramatic, to say the least.
I can't believe Jared would actually ever do that, no matter how depressed he really is. He just doesn't seem like the suicide type of guy, ya know? LOL. But I'm glad he doesn't really do that. That would be totally un-TCC and something along the plotline of the Worst FanFiction Ever (search it on Google-it's a laugh. You'll either want to laugh your head off or commit suicide...)
But I understand. Sometimes you just get really fed up with everything and want to type some bull** and laugh your arse off at how stupid it is...but I liked the beginning part of the scene. The ending...I can't stand angsty stuff like that.
Great! I love "Wherefore Art Though Discarded Scenes?"! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE write s'more!
| artistic dreamer 4/24/08 . chapter 3
whoa...that was a surprise...even thouugh you said that you just typed it out for no reason, it still came as a shock, i would never have thought jared to be the type of guy who did that...he's just too easy going and cool for that...ehh...except when it concerns reese and other guys hahah :D. man! you are too good at writing! now i want to go back and reread the entire story just to catch up with this! and i want to know how taylor and jared got together again :D hahaha, thanks for your updates!
| aryawolf13 4/24/08 . chapter 3
I'm thanking whoever's up there that you didn't out this scence up. I would've died if Jared did that!
I can see why you did't put it up though...too much drama and too little plot action?
Its good to read though, all your works are.
| Noctame 4/24/08 . chapter 3
o.O Lady that woulda been a freaky scene lol...
| dreamcatcher93 4/24/08 . chapter 3
hahaha... omg that was so funnaayy! lol so what were you planning on doing after that? seriously kill him? Maybe this was supposed to be a sad dramatic part but i was laughing soo hard! wow... m luvin these discarded scenes though.. :D
| kati-ann 4/24/08 . chapter 3
I like this scene. While it makes me overly upset at Jared it makes me wonder what the story would've come out like if you had put this into it. I'd love to see this continued a little bit!