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| painted.music 2008-05-01 ch 1,  | abusekonban wa Wow. I definitely get the sense of controlled anger -- or managed -- from this. When my poems are angry, I get sarcastic and bitter. I let my rage flow, but this -- I could read it as if I were bitterly ** at someone... but didn't tell them. Instead, I'd clench my teeth, turn away, and glare when they weren't looking. That's what this poem feels like to me. My favorite lines are: "you aren't even worth the few syllables it would take to tell you to go away." Wonderful. :D I like your style. Ha det -Shan- |
| ode to a nightingale 2008-04-29 ch 1, anon. | abuseWow. Been listening to Linkin Park, have you? :P Haha, just kidding. It's really powerful, although I am probably the one brushing the one off... I've done that a couple of times lmao Anyway, I really like it. :) |
| Faith Adeline 2008-04-22 ch 1, | abusevery good, solid piece :) Faith |