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| Dreams of death by Chocolat 2008-04-29 ch 2,  | abuseWow thats, intense. Really nice work. Hope your tests go well. Can't wait to see what happens! |
| menace in training 2008-04-29 ch 2, | abuseoh, i like lots, just take care to check all your tenses so it sounds right, you probably got alot of ideas, so it's hard to get them all down successively on paper. so yeah, check that out, other than that, brilliant plot and great setup of all the characters |
| Jevanminx 2008-04-22 ch 1, | abuseOh she gunna sing. I like how you didnt have her straight up for the audition and get it, it broke it up better. I cant wait to see how this evolves. JM |