This is really good!! :D
The emotions that the narrorator feels are expressed really well and you can feel it yourself as a reader!! I can really relate to how the narrorator feels to, and I love relateability cuz that makes the story more beleivable!!

Good job and keep writing!! :D

Please tell me you don't mean this...Dani...

Great work on this piece. It is very well done. I Really like the use of emotion to connect with the readers, It draws attention very well. The tragic ending is sad, but it gives me the image of the harsh realities many people face.