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| East-0f-Eden 2008-04-22 ch 1,  | abusethe opiate of the masses is religon you must know that to have used it. But the rest of your poem doesn't seem to have anything to do with religion or rebeling agaist it whatever. So I'm left not knowing. |
| Phylicia Dawn 2008-04-22 ch 1, | abuse"a turning planet all covered, smothered in thick white pages, yellowed from ages past, a moldy cast a snap and the arm is exhumed from a plaster tomb too soon the fracture set wrong the bone is long and thin, brittle and creaky marrow leaky" |