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| Confetti Kitty 2008-07-08 ch 2, | abuseI really like this story. It's an original idea, which is great, and your writing is clear wwith a good flow to it. Looking forward to an update :D |
| totalcrash5 2008-04-28 ch 1, | abuseIts good. You know how to write, thats for sure. And its got length, which gets some brownie points in my book. Post a second chapter for a better, well-rounded feel. Err, thats what I think anyway. |