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| Abdul Alhazred - John Brewe... 2008-05-17 ch 1,  | abusemchange. That name exchange is high life and good thinking, but you strike me as the sort of writer who wakes up every morning and feels like yesterday's you is dead... or am I just projecting perhaps? perhaps. Good though, Poet. |
| prick 2008-04-22 ch 1, | abuseStriking, thought-provoking. I love it. I didn't get the idea that this will be an on-going story, but I feel like it easily could be. I love things like this, that really make you think about the standards in society that we have to live up to, even the ones we don't think about, like our names. Our names are the beginning of our identities. This is something I've toyed with in my mind before, and I like how you laid it out. |
| East-0f-Eden 2008-04-22 ch 1, | abuseit always sounds like a good idea. but it rarely it. it's hard to escape your past. David liked Oreos and so does Steven. He still has that memory from the past. Your story is very good. I like the development. Keep writting. |