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| Cupid's Jinx 2008-04-23 ch 1,  | abuseHaha! Somehow I think the roses aren't the reason... :P -x- |
| The.Wizard.Pen.Dragon 2008-04-22 ch 1, | abuselol! This is really funny, but I do think that you should re-write the first sentence. I LOVE this though! Write on! Pen.Dragon |
| Just My Cup Of Tea 2008-04-22 ch 1, | abuseThis is really funny! My only suggestions are to revise the first sentence (it's a little awkward, especially the "blind wrong" part). Great job! |