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| Kevin Hilrester 2008-05-06 ch 3,  | abuseI loved your story! it was super suculant. Ratings are as follows creativity: 20/20 dialouge: 18/20 plotline: 19/20 lenght: 20/20 segway: 17/20 Overal score:94/100=A |