Whoa buddy! Before I say anything else- TYPOS! I mean, typos left and right! Everywhere!

But besides that, I liked it alot. It's not one of those cliche' love stories and it got you hooked, because all of a sudden, you find out tis guy's gay who you just got introduced to! Completely pulls you in. I was disappointed in the lack of description, but besides that and typos, it was really really good.

I hope you respect my reviews despite my age. It would mean alot.

~Luna Turner

I really like this story :)