hehe. I like her sarcastic ways...and jason...

That Dibby dude really needs to lighten up! This story is fantastic! Even world renown writers like Stephen King, J.K Rowling, and Stephenie Meyers make spelling mistakes. Plus none stuck out as I read.

Brilliant! I loved it! Update as soon as possible!

Oh gosh! Hurry and update. I can't wait...
VAMIRE? Right. Yeah...

Why is everyone around here so serious? Goodness. Your story is awesome! Isn't the website like fanfiction? Everyone is so uptight here...
ANYWAY, your story rocks! I would LOVE to have parents like that and travel the world fighting bad guys!

Same concerns with this chapter - it's a very short chapter to begin with, and doesn't merit four whole footnotes. Jumping up and down the page all the time is quite disconcerting. Work on incorporating this information into the rest of the story, it'll flow a lot better. And the chapters could be expanded, I think, I know that I prefer gargantuan chapters, but I think people would agree that if the entire text of the chapter can fit on one browser screen it's probably not long enough.

Please don't take my criticism as flaming, though! I wouldn't bother to offer this advice if I didn't think this story had potential. I'm really looking forward to seeing what strange creatures our intrepid heroine will find in foreign parts. And I really hope she ends up defeating it/them through the Power of Windex. :P

*improves her life span*

This is a very good start! The character has a very natural voice. I would recommend cutting down on the footnotes, though. I mean, I love footnotes - I'm a Discworld fan, and every Discworld book has footnotes! - but having five of them in a short prologue is rather excessive. You could easily work all of those asides into the actual body of the text - footnotes are more for information or jokes that are an actual aside or otherwise break from the flow of the story.

"That obscure tropical island I mentioned? In habited by selkies, my parents were studying them. Nice white sanded beaches though." LOL.

this is great. keep writing!