Reviews for Once There Was A Little Cat

Reviews For: Once There Was A Little Cat

LotusGrave 2009-03-22 . chapter 1

*Cuddles the kitten* How absolutly ADORABLE!

Hitokiri-Neko 2008-04-23 . chapter 1

AW! He sounds so cute! (cuddles with the kitty)

a silenced revolution 2008-04-22 . chapter 1

cute. flows pretty well.
i'd suggest adding punctuation.
and maybe another stanza, because it seems incomplete.

.adrian.

Ghost Planet 2008-04-22 . chapter 1

Too many 'that's in the first 3 lines.

And it seems...unfinished. Like there should be another stanza or something.

I'd work on it, if I was you.

Princess-anna57 2008-04-22 . chapter 1

:) Hehe cool. I like this poem. Write on!

~Anna~ ^_^

Scarlett Wynter 2008-04-22 . chapter 1

that's adorable! great job!