That was cute. Good job, though it'd be better as a real video... but is that not the point of writing screen plays? I like this, especially Ace's character.

i like this.
while i was reading it i kind of got an old school feel like 1920s or sumthin, it was kind of cool.

i really like it, i luv ace.
this was really well written can't wait to read more of ur stuff.

its so hard to find good screenplays and stuf on here anymore so i'm glad i stumbled upon this.

great job!