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| K.N.B. Stevens 2008-06-09 ch 1, | abuseI really like how you depicted the last minutes of Jeremy's life. |
| M. Scalora 2008-05-09 ch 1, | abuseVery dark and chilling; I love your vivid word choices. The morbid implications surrounding Jeremy really make this really feel real, and scary. I can't say I have any criticism for you, because I believe you've written this pretty flawlessly. Great job! |