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Reviews For: The Beast Within

Beyond-the-Shadows
2008-04-26
ch 1,
abuseI like this too- though confused- was this written before or after you wrote the other one i just reviewed- and are either of these going to be turned into books on fictionpress?
Obviously this is set after the other one but which was written first? and are they both one shots?
xxchar16xx
2008-04-25
ch 1,
abuseI loved this! I hope you're going to write more soon!
The characters were so dark but awesome!

I didn't see any gramatical errors either . . . I usually just point them out if I see them, but I didn't see any.

You're exceptional at describing interactions between the characters and I love the idea of werecats (probably among other animals, right?)It's very original . . . great job!


by the way thanks for your review!
Gothik Vamp Chik
2008-04-23
ch 1,
abusewow...i really like your story! its really good!! ^_^ love all the detail!
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