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A. Nicole 2009-03-27 . chapter 1
You havent updated in ages, but I just wanted to say that I hope you haven't given up...I've enjoyed all of your stories and would absolutely love to see more!
phelps112 2009-02-01 . chapter 8
Good so far, can't wait to read more.
cosmopolitan 2008-12-25 . chapter 1
wow, this is truly brilliant work, i sincerely hope that you have not given up writing fiction here as it'd be such a waste of a truly amazing talent... particularly when you have such fantastic fics here left incomplete

merry Christmas and hope to see you post soon!
Lucy-the-bookworm 2008-10-09 . chapter 8
Ok I'm loving this!! Update please!! :)

Lucy
collegestudent 2008-09-24 . chapter 8
Are you going to be continuing this story? Please?! It is intriguing...different than your others because of the point of view, I suppose. I'm also eagerly awaiting updates about Fiona and Eleri! :)
a beginner 2008-06-04 . chapter 8
go on go on go on...
britty-tt 2008-05-02 . chapter 8
I'm realy lyking this story so far.
I love the whole idea of this story, and it seems to have the beginnings of a good plot.
Can't wait for more
Faith Adeline 2008-05-01 . chapter 8
dun dun dun! Great job, I love that he has a son, how cute. And now the case with her mom...hmm...Keep it up and update soon!
Faith
Elodie Wolfe 2008-05-01 . chapter 8
AH DAVID... wow, can't wait to learn more of the secrets and what's going on with Grace's mom. Update soon please!.
LoveMiddi~(btw how are you doing with Fiona's story?)
HelloLovely 2008-05-01 . chapter 8
I love it! but I completely called the whole having a song thing. = D I can't wait to see what happens in the next chaters. I wish the chapters were a little longer, though, because I seem to read them so quickly and I want to find out what happens.

Love,
Becca
Victoria 2008-05-01 . chapter 8
This is great. Keep up the good work.
rainbabie 2008-05-01 . chapter 8
LOL, you totally answered my question about if the townspeople knew who the father was. Still, I'm suprised Grace wasn't shunned. Or, maybe she is and there haven't been interaction between her and the rest of the town was..

Anyhow, looks like my 2 chapters are up. *sigh* Back to work...
rainbabie 2008-05-01 . chapter 7
HI!

So, I've been doing pretty badly today. I'm just beyond stressed from work and planning to go on vacation and trying to prepare and get work ready for it.

Thank god you have 2 chapters out.

Let's just say you put a smile on my face when I saw the alerts :) THANKS!!

And... OMG! I was SO right!
Do the townspeople know? How come they didn't even blink an eye? Aren't small towns known for discriminating against single moms?

OMG OMG.. Can't wait for your next chapter before I go back to stressing about work ... Thank you again!!
Jevanminx 2008-05-01 . chapter 8
Her mother went missing, interesting.
JM
Jevanminx 2008-05-01 . chapter 7
See now I thought it must have been something like that, but you made it so it wasnt to obvious which is good, and I liked it.
JM
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