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Reviews For: The Exploding Ant

x3life
2008-06-03
ch 1,
abuseaw this was really cute!! =)
gulistanlik
2008-06-03
ch 1,
abuseOmg this is hilarious! I seriously love that James guy! And Hannah, rock on!

gulistanlik
JamieBell
2008-05-26
ch 1,
abuseHehe, I liked that! Nice to read something set outside of high school and in the real world. Love the pajama shorts...must get some with "hideously adorable poodles."
souslesstars
2008-05-22
ch 1, anon.
abuseAww. I really loved this! I've been on a . . . let's just call it a "one-shot-binge" these days. That sounds really bad literally. HAHA. Anyways, excuse me.
I really loved how you worked the title into the story! The first bit with Hannah reading about the exploding ant. haha. And then her later referencing that to James was great! I have to be honest, I didn't give a whole lot of thought to the Zoo Life bit in the beginning, but when she was trying to remember the name of it, I was like, "Oh, there's the significance in that!" haha. I'm so . . . yeah, anyways again :)
Just to tell you I loved this! I will get to reading your other story! Hopefully my love of one-shots will die away soon so I can get to reading multi-chaptered stories. Heh. Thanks for sharing this!
admit it.you luv me
2008-05-22
ch 1,
abuselol..this is so cute
BWeep
2008-05-12
ch 1,
abuseGreat humor! Loved it, but I did not really get to see too much of Hannah's personality.
AK the Twilight
2008-05-04
ch 1,
abuseRomance, this is? Hm...sounds like an atypical one at least. This was a well-written one, though. The dialogue fit together well and the descriptions were easy to visualize. Can't say I'm a huge fan of such couplings, but the whole hospital setting was a welcome and unique change.

This did seem to drop off, though. There's plenty of room for expanding this, though we can't continue every story. That wouldn't be right.

Good job, though. This was a clever and well-spoken read.
AiAi The All Powerful
2008-05-02
ch 1,
abuseheh, i like it. its got style.
Kohlomere
2008-04-30
ch 1,
abuseHe really was a little shit.
Impressive.
Great work,
E.
Pinkamoo
2008-04-29
ch 1,
abuseHuh. Cute! I would have tried to make him grovel, though.
Written
2008-04-24
ch 1,
abuseOH GEEZE. I loved it. I wish I was able to write stories about jerk guys and the women they love. Seriously, I just can't do it, but I really have a soft spot for it.

With that out of the way, just wanted to say that you are a great writer. awesome style and all that jazz, so keep up the great work!
illusionistic
2008-04-23
ch 1,
abuseas a one shot, it was funny and engaging, as well as making it's point. xD
i really liked it, and the title too. (:
good job.
Noie
2008-04-23
ch 1,
abuseGreat one-shot. I remember it from before and I always hoped for a sequel. Thanks for reposting it!
Walrus Lover 2.0
2008-04-23
ch 1,
abuseWhy didn't you include anything about a walrus? Stupid ants.

- Wally
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