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| Sexy vampirechick 2008-05-08 ch 1, | abuseOk. To tell you the truth;I didn't really get the meaning behind this poem. I like the metaphors you used,that helped me out a little. What troubled me was that the whole poem was word by word.I suppose that was intentional,but didn't quite get why,'cause to me the flow wasn't so great. |
| "Ilovewalruslover2.0" 2008-04-23 ch 1, anon. | abuseI totally understand what you're trying to say. Let the art flow! |