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Sexy vampirechick
2008-05-08
ch 1,
abuseOk. To tell you the truth;I didn't really get the meaning behind this poem. I like the metaphors you used,that helped me out a little.

What troubled me was that the whole poem was word by word.I suppose that was intentional,but didn't quite get why,'cause to me the flow wasn't so great.
"Ilovewalruslover2.0"
2008-04-23
ch 1, anon.
abuseI totally understand what you're trying to say. Let the art flow!
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