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| alittlebitconfused 2008-04-23 ch 1,  | abuseI really like your rhyming within the second and third lines, it really pulls them together. The message is really good, great poem! :) |
| Random-Idiocity 2008-04-23 ch 1, | abuseVery good.. ''guessing my future'' I thought that was great, and so true. You never know what tomorrow brings. Keep it Up! |