Reviews for Their burning children fast to it

Tytherpol 2008-04-23 ch 1,	abusethat's pretty intense. both subject matter and form. it even feels like a rush. a lot of searching and running. i love that you didn't use a period until the end. "Famine bring about a religious fast/ignoring their stomach they’re/scurrying about to/build homes for the children" --i like the rest of the piece too, but i really love this part. 'paradise lost' lol :) we can only wish.
Random-Idiocity 2008-04-23 ch 1,	abuseWith such a catastrophe, all this can occur. Excellent piece. Keep it Up!