Reviews for fold away my past

painted.music 2008-04-23 ch 1,	abusekonnichi wa Such a wonderful line. It had me stunned with its brilliance really: "You count the tocks on the clocks / just to make sure time isn't / cheating again." Wow. Breathtaking, as was the rest of the poem... but those lines especially. May I add that to my quotebook? Ha det -Shan-
perpetual questions 2008-04-23 ch 1,	abuseMy grandmother had Alzeimer's / dementia. lovely, sad imagery.